Thread:Nillatea/@comment-24034641-20140402132808

Hey, Thanks for the edit to the page, I went over it and saw a few problems, you seemed to have just stayed on the events of one part, and then back tracked and spoke about other events that were happening at the same time, as well as missing a key point from the episode. When writing episode summaries, remember to write it as it goes, not sticking to one part, and then adding another part afterwards that was happening at the same time. Also try to be a bit more descriptive in the summary, and don't add pictures randomly into the page.

Your images were okay, however due to, being jpgs, their names, quality, image size and also having subtitles, they were deleted, with one of them being reuploaded as a png at proper quality and size.

I'll be making an image policy for everyone to follow soon enough so that images don't get uploaded that aren't needed.

However all in all, you did a good edit for your first edit here. 